Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum
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Toxic attraction can mean different things and imho, in a more large view, we are not far from it yet.
That said, I’ve caught your point and agree. Indeed I think that the story had to be ended at chp 13, the first creampie if I remember well. Since impregnation was one of the topic of the story, always with the (only) three of them, some other chapters to corrupt her to pregnancy might have been issued, maybe.
But after going out the Chigago home, and involving other people, for reason I have extensively explained in this forum, this is not that story anymore and what have happened in ch 28 is the natural evolution of the story. Other than that it would have been an erotic comic and I have to give my 2 cents to DS he is a hell of a writer when it comes to hardcore writing.
And I give you more, Lester will be under attack now for a lot of time, and his hold on Sarah will be less strong for sure. If he swaps the pill now, he is doing the worst mistake possible for his plan. But any people under attack loses focus, anyone…
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I think this whole Otis thing is a waste of time but did notice one thing, when Sarah was with Lester, while Dan was there, she tried to make eye contact with Dan/involve him. Now she has been with Lester many times without Dan around/ having to pay attn to him (maybe has forgotten) and really doesn't attempt to do too much while with Otis....just shows more how this is no longer about Dan's fetish, more about Sarah's descent.
also any word from Chillie, he usually had insight into discord. I wonder what they're pushing on Don/where story may go?
also any word from Chillie, he usually had insight into discord. I wonder what they're pushing on Don/where story may go?
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i don't have them anymore (sorry), but this was the biggest disappointment to me. the last two chapters are just endless marital drama, it BARELY gets into sex at all. truly insane decision by this author
After spending same time a way from the series and rereading it, I can say I still don't like this chapter. There were some positives like the glimpse into Lester's database and his next targets (what did happened to that one women he almost killed?!), actually liked the cronos and Lincoln group emerging as lester's adversaries. Did not like the Otis thread, if there is a positive I could find it is that nothing earth shattering happened in that scene, so I could possibly ignore that part as gas leak episode and move on with the main storyline. Though I would've loved to see something like Sarah thinking about Lester during the whole ordeal. Maybe wondering what would Lester think about this three some and even thinking of taking some pictures. Maybe something like leaving a souvenir like her panties in letters desk drawer or something.
My biggest grip with the chapter is the time skip. It seems like at least a month passed since Jesse incident and Dan moving in, and it was mentioned as a footnote. It seems like DS could ve explored more story threads in that time period. We could've had a scene where all three of them host a 'summit' of sorts to figure out how to deal with Dan's layoff and rent situation. We could have had Dan at home looking after the kids while Sarah, in the name of having girls night out, sneaks into lester's room. We could've had an office party scene with our main characters. We could've had scenes like Dan working in the basement and noticing the stains in the futon. We could've had scenes like Dan ignoring his job hunt and snooping on Lester at middleton. As some one mentioned here, thinking about the story could've been pisses me off more that the story written.
My biggest grip with the chapter is the time skip. It seems like at least a month passed since Jesse incident and Dan moving in, and it was mentioned as a footnote. It seems like DS could ve explored more story threads in that time period. We could've had a scene where all three of them host a 'summit' of sorts to figure out how to deal with Dan's layoff and rent situation. We could have had Dan at home looking after the kids while Sarah, in the name of having girls night out, sneaks into lester's room. We could've had an office party scene with our main characters. We could've had scenes like Dan working in the basement and noticing the stains in the futon. We could've had scenes like Dan ignoring his job hunt and snooping on Lester at middleton. As some one mentioned here, thinking about the story could've been pisses me off more that the story written.
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So it was kind of realistic. antarctica77 must want to change the course a little so as not to be like the others. However, did Lisa have sex with the young man from work? When I get the materials I will express my opinion better. It's cool to have the drama of marriage and relationship (he's the one who made Lisa divided).
I'm not as disappointed with this last chapter (28) as some others are. First, I think it shows that Dan and Sarah can control their kinks without Lester. I predicted a long time ago that Dan may actually take control and work with Sarah on what they both want. The only big disappointment for me was Dan not joining in with Otis and Sarah because this does raise the question if Dan has balls enough to take control? The next question is what will Sarah's punishment be once Lester finds out she had sex with Otis without his permission? Assuming he finds out, but I think he will. The chapter also tells us that the Lincoln Group is going to soon link Lester with his hacking. Those predicting that Lester's life is at stake may be correct. The swapping of the birth control pills is up in the air. Even if Lester made the swap now, it would probably be a month before Sarah would be susceptible of becoming pregnant. A lot of sex can happen in a month. Also Cronos is back on the scene. I also mentioned in the past that Dan and Cronos need to connect somehow. It would solve Dan and Sarah's financial problems if Cronos is indeed willing to pay exorbitant money to see Sarah in action. What would he pay to actually be involved one on one?
The Chronos thing is just problematic because Lester blocked him. Also, the story, actually, did not name Lester as the person they were going after. They just said they tracked the person down, no name given. As I stated earlier, Lester stated that he needed to spend some alone time so he could work toward his goals with Sarah. I believe that it would not be out of the realm of possibilities if Lester actually framed Dan for what he did to the Lincoln Group. Dan would have all the motive in the world to do so and Lester would be using the same home ip address as Dan, as he is home at his apartment. Lester could use the opportunity to get into Dan's stuff and completely make it look like he has broke into their system in order to exact revenge for Kevin (???, I think, hell I don't know any more, the guy who fucked Sarah in the office) fucking Sarah. Dan will deny it but Lester will have built a case against Dan and Sarah might even believe it after the Jessie thing, as Dan is losing it, even when the family's financial security is on the line. Lester would be there to pick up the pieces of Sarah's broken heart and the Lincoln group would use the knowledge that they could easily ascertain to convince Jessie to press charges against Dan, unless -- of course -- he dies while in the hospital or goes into a persistent vegetative state, then the cops press charges immediately, with no victim necessary.
But Lester sold the hospital record from his Middleton hotel, not from Chicago. Even if he could mask his IP, TLG could see the two people living in that address, sees that one's wife works in hospital, other guy actually works there overseeing IT and could come to the easiest conclusion (occum's razor and all). Or TLG could go the easier route and screw both if them.
I wonder how DS will answer the Jesse question. Also what happened to the discord meet with Ned and gang? Now that its been months, I guess that storyline is kaput.
I still have questions about the setup for next chapter: so Sarah and Dan are driving to Chicago, her parents are there to meet them, Dan have to leave to D.C., so Sarah, her parents and Lester are in Chicago......so who's looking after their kids?!
Sorry Friend this would be WAY beyond Lester Superman.
Think about it.
Human Lester can be good at what he does, maybe the best. But you cannot think that other people maybe hired by companies with a ton of money aren’t skilled enough to pursuit the goals. Lester is alone they can have tenths working on a project.
What Lester has done to LNG is threatening their safety. Do you think they are going to let him easily framing someone else? In this cases when the rock begins to roll it’s difficult to stop it. They cannot let someone to fool with them because they can have the same potential problem in the future. They NEEDS to fix it for good.
Again as the good Abraham said:
You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you can not fool all of the people all of the time.
M2C
The only other answer then would have to be that the Lincoln Group catches Lester unawares next chapter and then he is gone, everything goes back to Dan and Sarah and story is done. Hell, Dan and Sarah will probably hold a party while Sarah fucks everyone else because she couldn't possibly act like she did with Otis and then just return to Dan. Maybe it would be best if 29 was it and everything else just falls off the cliff. At the very least, if Lincoln is a law abiding group they turn Lester immediately over to the FBI for corporate espionage, everything then comes to light, Dan is proven right, Sarah feels stupid and used by a criminal and they just do what is safe and move to another state and stay to themselves, not trusting the rest of society, because after this is exposed only an idiot would walk around with any trust for anyone, anytime soon.
Really it’s not what I was meaning.
I don’t think he can frame Dan and/or Sarah within this unfolding, this is what I was saying.
Indeed I think that in the end both LG and Lester have shadow businesses, so probably the most probable outcome is Lester working freelance for them for tons of money.
The problem is what is going to happen in the meantime. In the meantime we will have Lester trying to hide and defending himself and this will distract somewhat him from his quest on Sarah. That’s in a story with a minimum suspension of disbelief of course.
In this context he can make mistakes, e.g. thinking he is able to manage his defense and quest, for example exchanging the pills asap. As we know(but we don’t know about Lester knowledge yet, I suppose he will and could have hidden cameras in his office) Sarah has given access to her womb to different males, so for his quest this would be very risky.
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DS make Dan dumber while even more a cuck chapter after chapter, its not even the same character than the beginning.
He's so weak thats the story is boring as hell
He's so weak thats the story is boring as hell
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